Closed and well defined
Yet open
to the most beautiful
limitless dreams
Waiting to explode
A box full of butterflies
Caterpillars they were…
…
…
A day’s end nears…
Dark night to follow…
Fireworks await us…
To light up the sky
And wake us from slumber!
…
…
Let go my love!
Set yourself free!
Help me free myself!
Help me… Help you!!!
Tags: closed worlds, Dreams, Poetry, reality checks
April 14, 2009 at 9:59 pm
if anyone did not see fireflies across a dark sky and have stars in their eyes after reading this… i dont know what can …
this is beautiful
April 14, 2009 at 10:03 pm
ooooohhhhh im sorry. i just realised this was not exactly romance of the teenage kind
and for that: it just grew far more beautiful
April 15, 2009 at 11:59 am
awww
April 17, 2009 at 8:03 am
interesting
April 25, 2009 at 11:28 am
“U2 Freak” called me from your live performance at Royal Rodale last night.
for a person who breathes through “mer loag” (and i cannot thank you enough for that song. the song has much meaning to me and is very clsoe to me. for me. its the knowledge you speak of in this post), it was a delight and treat to her you perform it live. =D
all teh best with everything, always.
April 28, 2009 at 1:23 am
gr8
May 5, 2009 at 8:30 pm
Hey man,
you and ali noor inspired me to start my own blog, i started two months ago and its been getting attention.
Do check it out if you can..its a humor blog so Im sure ull laugh
http://saadizz.blogspot.com/2009/05/crazy-ass-90s.html
May 9, 2009 at 3:05 pm
” let go my love ! ”
here with words “my love” you are refering to your lover or the love you have in your heart for your lover?
dreams are fictous! that’s what you want to say?
( Fifiland? Fifi in french is a fag ! )
sorry,i m very bad at poetry ! a dear friend shared this with me, that’s why iam trying to figure it out! i want to know what actually that friend is trying to tell me!
June 10, 2009 at 3:11 pm
superb, wow, nice han ,keep it up,luv u all.take care.
June 12, 2009 at 2:46 pm
Great Blog and amazing music. Just heard a rumor that you’re singing Coke Studio’s title song for season 2 as well? Is it true? Check out my Blog when you get a chance at http://www.omarulhaq.wordpress.com.
Keep the blog and I’ll look forward to following it.
June 12, 2009 at 9:43 pm
Nice!
Im so glad you and Ali noor are back!!!
I love the perfornamce of Kedaar!
nd not to forget that u looked great!
June 16, 2009 at 7:56 pm
On coke Studio…youll like =D
http://saadizz.blogspot.com/2009/06/coke-studio-is-like-sheeshacool-d.html
June 16, 2009 at 10:53 pm
I was surprised to c u guys performing in coke studio… the way u both sang Aik Alif was awesome… I was dumbstruck to c u guys sing a folk song with such perfection… it could not have been better!
first Ali Noor’s high scaled yet very melodious voice… but we were used to listen to him singing… the surprise was ur voice… I have heard ur voice in dou dil kutty n sum other songs i guess… plus i have watched ur jam session on youtube… but the way u sang the last part of aik alif was different from all of them… the deep mesmerizing sufi-style voice and then the smooth shift to ur original sweet voice… i was like whoa this is Ali Hamza… i mean i have usualy seen u contributing only on guitars as part of noori… but when i heard ur voice and ur amazing control over it… i m sure every noori fan was amazed… Keep it up man!! We want more from U
June 18, 2009 at 4:54 pm
O ‘o Why let go my Lover
this is not the custom of Faith
Hamza u know John Alia said
“Dare-e-Gham e Hayaat ka Darmaan Nahin Sharaab
Yeh Zeher be Asar he,isey Pee chuka hoon Main”
July 20, 2009 at 11:04 am
Liked the poem.. now if only if it was that easy to let go and remain open to dreams.. trying at least
July 27, 2009 at 5:27 am
SALAM!
I just want to say that you were amazingly awesome on coke studio aik alif. I seriously dont have any words to explain myself!
And also..love ur new look, suits you!
TC allahafez